These are some fabulous cinquain poems and a piece of recount writing from Room 1.....
 
Earthquake
When the earthquake came, my brother, my mum and I were out.
My mum went into the fish and chip shop and my brother and I were waiting in our car.
I felt our car shaking.
It was a big one!
I was scared because I thought the car was going to fall.
By Joella.
 
Earthquake
Loud rumbling
Smashing, moving, jiggling
It was the biggest!
MOVE!
By Riley
 
Earthquake
Rumbling, powerful
Smashing, crashing, bashing
Buildings came down
Wobble!
By Ezra
 
Earthquake
Raring rumble
Crashing, moving, jiggling
Some books fell down
Damage!
By Tamara
 
Earthquake
Powerfully annoying
Rumbling, shaking, crumbling
Wellington buildings often collapsed
Dangerous!
By Denis
 
 
Earthquake
Grumpy, loudly
Wildly smashing, crashing
Buildings came down like a giant’s foot
A stomping movement!
By Jeremy

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